2013年4月27日雅思作文评析

1.小作文

1）类型
地图，城市格局规划
2）题目
The graph shows a plan for a new town. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.；



3）思路
本次考题是选址题的变种，描述思路主要是由内而外地描写地图。需要掌握与地理位置相关的词汇。
4）参考范文
Given is a map of a new town illustrating the probable distribution of various zones as well as major transportation links.

As shown in the figure, the town has four main zones. Located in the middle of the town is the town centre containing several shops. Three car parking lots and two bus stations are expected to be built on both east and west edges of the town centre. Surrounding the centre is a large residential area which has within it some small-scale recreational areas. Beyond this, meanwhile, is an even larger area combining two residential zones in the northeast and southwest, two smaller industrial zones in the southeast and northwest and a much larger recreational zone in the west. These two residential zones have direct access to the town centre by four main roads, while the other zones on the outskirts are only connected with the ring road around the middle residential zone. (154 words)
注意：
Parking is space for parking vehicles in.Parking是不可数的。
Parking lots or car parks才是可数的。

2.大作文

1）类型
教育类议论文
2）题目
Some people think that older schoolchildren should study many subjects, while others think that it is better to study a smaller number of subjects in detail.
3）思路
广泛课程的好处：
为学生提供全面的教育provide children with a rounded education
广泛课程的坏处：
学的过多分散学生注意力distract students from focusing on core courses
4）好词好句
全面发展的学生a well-rounded student
更多通识课程能帮助发展多种学习技能和方法。General subjects encourage a diverse range of skills and methods of learning.
数学锻炼学生逻辑思维Mathematics helps children develop logic and reasoning skills.
艺术课培养学生的欣赏能力Art classes encourage creativity.
通过让双手表达大脑的想象来锻炼协调运动能力Improve fine motor skills by forcing the hand to create the vision of the mind
孩子特长有所不同Children have talents in all sorts of different areas.
过早限定某些课程是不正确的It is wrong to force them to specialise too early.
帮助学生找到自己的兴趣所在enable students to find where their talents lie
5）相关题目
Extra-curriculum的好坏