构思过程:
Introduction - rewrite the question in a different way.
Summary - write one sentence summarising the trend shown on the graph, and one sentence summarising the table.
Details paragraph - describe the graph in detail (maybe 3 sentences).
Details paragraph - describe the table in detail (maybe 3 sentences).
开头:将题目用自己的话表达一遍
总结:写一句话总结图,一句话总结表
段:详细描述趋势图
二段:详细描述表格
满分范文:
The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.
It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.
In 1900, around 500km³ of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.
In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m³, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m³, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.