十类话题搞死雅思写作-犯罪类

犯罪类的雅思写作话题常考的就是青少年的犯罪原因，以及对青少年犯罪的惩罚措施。下面来看一下的孙笑飞老师是如何看待这个题目的。
In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes.
Why is this case happening?
How should children or teenagers be punished?

雅思考题思路分析：

原因：
1、个人原因，容易冲动
2、团体原因，庭，单亲庭
3、社会原因，多变
惩罚措施：
1、教育

本题适合用分析说明式
段：引出主题 ，表明写作目的
二段：分析原因
三段：提出对策
四段：总结全文

雅思范文：

There is no doubt that youth is the most valuable period throughout one person’s whole lifetime. However, some teenagers spend this time period in prison and fail to secure a bright future. In this essay, I will examine the reasons for this problem and propose the proper punishment.

个人原因
Firstly, teenagers are psychologically immature. For example, they tend to be tempted to do something wrong, in order to show off their personalities. Being inexperienced and ignorant, these children are likely to go astray under the influence of social ills.
团体原因
Secondly, some of those who commit crimes probably come from single-parent families which might cast a shadow when they were young. These teenagers therefore are likely to take extreme actions with the purpose of self-protection and defense.
社会原因
Last but not least, changeable society makes even the adults confused about what happiness and dreams are and how they can accomplish the target, let alone kids without any social experience and lack of social practice.

教育为主
Admittedly, one person is supposed to shoulder whatever he or she has done. However, the way to punish teenagers who commit crimes requires prudent consideration. This is mainly because imprisonment, the common punishment, will exert negative influences on their whole life. They will have a hard time hunting for a decent job after being discharged from prison. So, education and training, I believe, should be the main focus. For one thing, they are able to acquire some technical knowledge which helps to adapt to this highly competitively society. For another, they can thoroughly understand their wrongdoings and have the sense of social responsibility.

Overall, I conclude that punishing these young criminals is not absolutely a hasty job. We should not only give them inherent punishment, making them aware of their mistakes, but we should also take their bright future into account, preventing them from reverting to crimes.