雅思写作10月2号大作文分析

10月2号再次考核政府资金如何使用的问题, 相对于之前政府是否应该花钱修建体育馆;政府是否应该支付大学生学费,已经今年1月9号的政府是否应该提供免费交通问题,显得考点比较具体,先来跟着规划师程莹老师来看题目:

Government funding should only be provided for the best students as scholarships. Other funding of universities should come from student fees and private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

政府的资金应该只以奖学金的形势给优秀的学生,其他学校资金应该是从其他机构和学生学费中来. 你是否同意这个说法?

这个题目我们根据惯例会想到单边倒,同意或者不同意,若是同意那就是认为政府的钱只应该给优秀的学生,这个时候我们就忽略了,还有一部分学习不是特别好,但是来自于贫困庭的学生怎么办呢? 这也是西方作文体现人文关怀的一个方面, 这样一分析,我们就得出结论,反面论证更好些,考场更容易发挥.

段: 背景导入

How to allocate the governmental funds appropriately has been the shared concerns of the whole society. Undeniably, the money should go to the best students in top universities first.

二段:为何优秀的学生应该拿奖学金?

三段: 政府还应该资助穷学生

四段:商业机构和有能力支付学费的个人也是重要来源

结尾: 大学的长久发展需要三方合力(重申观点+升华)

以下为参考范文:

How to allocate the governmental funds appropriately has been the shared concerns of the whole society. Undeniably, the money should go to the best students in top universities first.

The best students in famous universities such as Yale and UC Berkeley deserve the awards from the authorities, as they have demonstrated excellent academic performance the whole country expects. It is the country that needs such talents to continue to make greater contributions in the future in various areas such as national defense, outer space exploration or medical care. Scholarship, naturally, is a kind of appreciation and encouragement

But that is not to say other students can never get any financial support from the governments. Some undergraduates, even they are not so splendid as their peers, also have tried their best. Unfortunately, they may come from single-parent or impoverished families, which makes them distracted and preoccupied. By assisting those students, the government may encourage more young generation to pursue their dreams without worrying about the tuition fee.

The government only cannot make the whole picture, other private agencies and students who are able to afford the fee of course should be the important sources for a university too. By being attached with a school, a business organization may win good reputation among the society and the young people who potentially may join the organization and. And students can be proud of being able to manage the fee themselves.

Education needs not only the good students but also the sufficient money for the schools to sustain. Hence the joint efforts from the government, private business and individuals are essential and complementary.

以上就是规划师为考生们带来的有关10月2日的大作文分析，希望考生们能加以分析。